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Meet me in the Sunlight by Twokinds Meet me in the Sunlight by Twokinds
After all the comics with Flora under a mask and all the pictures of "OMG boobz" and the like, I really just felt like doing a little more mellow piece. So I went through my old folders and notebooks to find the original Twokinds book, the one I wrote before I realized I had no writing ability. Well, I found it, and picked a random scene from it to draw. This was the result. For those of you interested in reading the original story, here it is. I hope it isn't too long, but please read it if you have the time. It's a rather nice scene, even if it was poorly written:

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"There was a definite awkward tension that hung among the dust motes in the morning light as Trace and Flora occupied their new home for the first time. It was not as if they hadn't stayed together before- quite the opposite, they had even slept together a few times during their adventures. Never-the-less, as they ascended the porch and stepped into the front archway, both wore a slight crimson blush upon their faces. Though, lucky for Flora, it wasn't noticeable through her orange fur.

As Trace continued into the house, Flora held back just beyond the oak wood door frame, glancing around in wide-eyed wonder. "I can't believe it's all ours," she breathed in fascination, mostly to herself.

Trace, noticing the absence of a particular furry presence, stopped before a marble kitchen and looked back. His heart leapt momentarily at the sight of Flora, as it sometimes did. Although there was nothing particularly special in her simple feline figure, the combination of her casual, white dress and the almost childlike curiosity in her expression, made her seem to glow as vibrantly as the sunlight that played along the loose strands of her hair.

Sensing that she was being watched, Flora looked up to see Trace smiling back at her. She quickly looked away as a new blush began to from beneath her fur. Casting her eyes downward, she notices the claws on her toes were fully extended from her excitement, and quickly retracted them again. It would be a shame to scratch the hardwood on the first day."
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:iconcyrusgrayhollow:
CyrusGrayhollow Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
D'awwww, she looks like an angel. :heart:
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:icon999kirby:
999kirby Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2015
Awwwww :333!!!
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:iconbandit-the-wolfess:
Bandit-The-Wolfess Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
You should write more on this one
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:iconpsycot1cgames:
PSYCOT1Cgames Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
"I had no writing ability" That is a complete lie!
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SkybornWG Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lies, lies, and more lies. Tom sometimes doesn’t realize how amazing he is ^^
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PSYCOT1Cgames Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Agreed
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:iconrobiniscool:
Robiniscool Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This should be included in the final scene of the story :D
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:icondallasblack:
DallasBlack Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
Simply gorgeous!
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nburr16 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this story shoud be online
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:iconstormlightliberation:
Wow...What do you mean you have no writing ability?! That was impressive; I read a lot of fanfic and this short paragraph alone tops a lot of stories I've read from some really good authors. There is a lot of talent there. It made me want to read the book...Are you going to put it online at any point? DeviantArt does literature too.

P.S. The picture is amazing, by the way, I just got sidetracked. I had no idea that TwoKinds was originally a book.
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mjponso Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
The definition of a beautiful (female) character, in my opinion, is one that looks just as appealing in a conservative white dress as in lingerie (just to give an example).  I can definitely see why Trace would find Flora so attractive. :nod:
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Lasveru Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I want to read th entire original book
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IdeaManForTheWin Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013
:hump: :hump:
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:iconmultigamerclub:
MultiGamerClub Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
Lovely.
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:iconzacisepic:
zacisepic Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
awesome pic it really brings her character out
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Omnikrystal Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
Your writing really isn't that bad, in fact I think it's very good. The details of the scenery are well integrated with the characters' actions and point of view, and the calm tone of the writing perfectly matches the mood of the scene. I'm trying to write a fanfiction myself, and what I've written so far still hasn't quite reached the caliber of yours. If you have any writing tips, I would like to hear them.
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Jmrbob300 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012
A good writer, and a good artist, ill be looking for graphic novels from you in the future
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xF4110UTB0Yx Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
Maybe one day TwoKinds will be a graphic novel......?
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:iconmodernyasha:
ModernYasha Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
lol I see what you did there
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:icontheengineer15:
TheEngineer15 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012
a angel?
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:iconbadassassin:
BADASSassin Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
i am very tempted to make a joke about how she sometimes scratches trace's hardwood.
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:iconjakesnakee:
Jakesnakee Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You are actuly really good, much better than me.
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Shadoworrior Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
tom u lier, ur writeing isnt bad at all... considering the amount fo books iv read threw middle school and high school thats actualy pritty good..
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daniellandrom Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
she is beutiful
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:iconmjponso:
mjponso Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012
I don't know Flora well enough to know if this is something she usually wears, but she looks positively beautiful in it. :aww:
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Meowmeowmeow21 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012
Keidran don't live as long as humans... Flora's waiting for Trace in heaven.
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:iconzalcik:
zalcik Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
your writing isnt bad, you just have to trim it down a little.
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Legacy9 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
I love this picture and the story was amazing.
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madryn123 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012
This must have been written before Flora became pregnant since there is no mention of it. Maybe she got an abortion (if that is possible in that world) but I HIGHLY doubt.
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madryn123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2012
You should put up a version of the book for sale on the website. I'd buy ten copies.
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Syft3land Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
To read the text, i had to scroll down, hiding most of the picture, wich by the way is fantastic. When I read, my eyes decieved me, making it look like the light on the picture was alive, dancing around flora. If that ain't talent, I don't know what is.
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Churchtastic Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Any possibility of you releasing your book for uber fans? :blush: Not that I need another excuse for my wife to tease me about being "only -slightly- furry" but if that snipit is a sample of your work there's certainly more worth reading!
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Zeropointcomics Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
hey Tom, I was wondering if I could try using your art style for a project. not your own character designs of course just the style. I have my own designs in mind ^^, also if you have doubts about how good your writing is (if you watch the show) imagine Castle reading this aloud. might do the trick.
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WWhiteSShadow Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
B-E-A-utiful...
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:iconlionheart599:
Lionheart599 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think the writing is Beautiful, my friend. simply inspiring..
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slang1100 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2011
Is there a place where I can find your book?
I would like to read it when I am on holiday to Sweden next week!
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:iconmadryn123:
madryn123 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012
I don't have any idea.... but if we bug him enough with emails then he just might put up copies for sale. WHICH WOULD TOTALLY AWESOME!
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:iconbansheehowl:
BansheeHowl Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011
You can buy the first book on indyplanet.com, but I guess you already have it by now ^^;
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:iconmadryn123:
madryn123 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2012
Yes but only the COMIC book. No offence intended.
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:iconbansheehowl:
BansheeHowl Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
Ah I see :3 For as far as I know, he has only done the comic version. It would indeed be awesome though if he would do a book version as well ^^
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DTSSpaz Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I agree (below), Flora is really pretty with all the given circumstances
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:iconluigilady95:
Luigilady95 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
I love flora! she looks so pretty here
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Sdh0902 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2011
Sweet drawing. Flora is awesome
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:iconbansheehowl:
BansheeHowl Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2011
wow, with that lighting, she looks even more beautiful than she usually is ^^
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:iconmastersorez:
MasterSorez Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I found you.
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:iconbansheehowl:
BansheeHowl Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011
Oh crap o.o Now I need to go hide again... :ninja: This is like the 3rd time or something XD But that means there are still dozens of comments written by me on his deviations that you haven't seen yet... :iconohjoyplz:
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:iconmastersorez:
MasterSorez Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yet. >:3
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:iconbansheehowl:
BansheeHowl Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011
:iconohfuckplz:
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:iconakd123:
akd123 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WtF!!!!???!?!??!!!
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:iconbansheehowl:
BansheeHowl Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012
Yes. Wtf indeed. :icono3o:
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